1:44-3.33 (1.89) The scene where Balian's wife is being buried should have been taken out because it's not really an important part. Taking out this scene would not affect the plot. To signify that Balian had a wife who died, her necklace could have symbolized her later in the movie.
3:33-3:55 (0.22s) This is the scene where Balian is welding. This scene is not important to the film and would not affect it if taken out.
27:30-28:23 (93s) This scene should be taken out because the next scene is where he is alone in the desert. The viewers would've assumed he might've found other modes of transport. Taking out this scene would affect the film by a small portion. If this scene was taken out we wouldn't of known Balian had his own "army" of men and how he got to the desert.
30:32-33:19 (2.87) Balian finds a horse in the middle of the desert, then get's into a fight before entering Jerusalem. He wins. This would affect the story in a small portion. Balian would not have known about Jerusalem. He would not have found it as quickly.
34:56-38:38 (37s) Balian is just walking. Not important to the film. Does not affect it.
38:11-39:14 (1.03) This scene is not important because Balian wakes up and calms a horse down, he then gives Sibylla water to drink. This would not affect any part of the movie.
51:03-53 (2min) Balian working in the village. This would not affect the movie. It should cut to when he talks to the people entering the village on horseback.
53:11-56:24 (3:13) Balian is talking to the Queen once again. Not important to the film, they talk multiple times throughout the film and the fact that Balian and the Queen like each other is already established.
58:12-103.40 (5min) Battle scene - I think there should be one big battle scene at the end, not multiple ones throughout the film. This might cause conflict because the audience might not know why both sides are fighting each other.
1:33.36-140.19 (7min) This scene is where Balian is looking over all the dead bodies from the battle field. This isn't important as he is just walking around looking at the bodies of the dead.
146.36-150.36 (6min) This scene is originally a 10 minute battle scene, I think this scene should've been shortened. 30.44
127:45-128:30 (85s) In this scene, we see Saladine's sister. From this scene, the audience is suppose to get that she is raped. This scene could be taken out and replaced by cutting to the next scene when Saladine is informed of his sisters rape. If this scene were taken out, we would not be introduced to Saladine's sister.
123:25-128:30 (5.05) In this scene we see that the Sibylla has agreed to marry Saladine. This scene can be taken out and should cut straight to the wedding.
(8min) We are introduced to Sibylla's son who is crowned King and has leprosy. We can cut out both part's where he doesn't feel the hot candle wax drip onto his skin and we can skip to the part where he is being poked in the foot with a needle and is being showed puppets. From there we can assume he has leprosy.
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